I liked how you had good and strong reasons and your cunclusion was really good, (couldn't find anything to wish for.)
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I like how you hooked the reader and your voice was loud and clear! Maybe you could give more proof, and make it match, but otherwise, it's awesome!
You did really good and your voice was clear. I like you conclusion with talking about what you learned.
I loved your essay, great job :)!!!
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I liked how you had good and strong reasons and your cunclusion was really good, (couldn't find anything to wish for.)
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ReplyDeleteI like how you hooked the reader and your voice was loud and clear! Maybe you could give more proof, and make it match, but otherwise, it's awesome!
ReplyDeleteYou did really good and your voice was clear. I like you conclusion with talking about what you learned.
ReplyDeleteI loved your essay, great job :)!!!
ReplyDeletevary clear
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